cabbageptch

I am not even half through the second chapter but I have to tell you how much I enjoy this. Your Blair and Dan voices are just pitch-perfect and your dialogue is so snappy that it just springs from the page. It makes me laugh out loud (for real and not just in a pro forma LOL sense).

Second comment. I really can't get over the fact how good your dialogue is (and your writing in general). I can't quote everything I liked, because well that would be pretty much everything.

"None taken," Dan deadpanned. After a moment he titled his head. "Although you were oddly specific about your insults."

"Please. Being oddly specific is part of my charm."

But this one sums up Blair Waldorf perfectly, being oddly specific is really a great part of her charm!